2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

It is indeed if everyone does not have knowledge in environmental concerns tend to receive the ideas about every professional what his said.If government focus on pass on knowledge and skills about environmental protection to the public,individuals faced up to the environmental and ecological issues，the geneal public have realized the importance and urgency of the problem and take concerted action now to address this environmental crisis It had seemed like such a different issues at the beginning, for individuals, society, institutions as well as governments for this purpose to strive together to attain this splendid goal about taking care of the environment.