学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;从句使用量稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨。
Dear Li Ming, I am writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my heartfelt congratulations to you on your success in passing the entrance examination.And I would like to make some suggestions on your forthcoming university life. To begin with,it is advisable for you to be equipped with computer skills,considering that we are now in a high-tech age.Besides,I would recommend that you continue studying English in your spare time,which will lay a solid foundation for your future study abroad.Lastly,emphasis should be given to communication skills as well as academic achievements. I genuinely hope that you will take my advice into consideration.Wish you a splendid university life. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
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