2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

It is indeed if everyone does not have knowledge in environmental concerns tend to adopt the any ideas which about every professional what his said will result in any adverse effects to the environment.But if governments focus on pass on knowledge and skills about environmental protection to the public when they faced up to the environmental and ecological issues，they can realized the importance and urgency of the problem and take concerted action now to address this environmental crisis It had seemed like such a different issue in the beginning, for individuals, society, institutions as well as governments for this purpose to strive together to attain this grand goal about taking care of the environment.