2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量稍小；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题。

The public environmental protection consciousness is still weaken and no proof that having knowledge of creating a friendly environment，environmental deterioration may with greater risks to our survival for years to come.Thus, when it related to environmental issues, individual may be able to study more bit of knowledge and experiences in order that better deal with other cases in the future.