2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

Environmental policy is accord with the principle of eco-economic management. The rapid development of human.For example,duo to the boom of the society,water pollution are becoming increasingly intensified every day, which leading to water shortage and contamination and the whole country which results in obstruct the economic development but also threaten human the existence of beings.