2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

Environmental policy is accord with the principle of eco-economic management. For example,duo to the rapid development of human society,water pollution becoming increasingly intensified every day, which leading to water shortage and contamination and the whole country which results in obstructing the economic development but also threaten human the existence of beings.