2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

By environmental education, the public did their damnedest to creating awareness and comprehension of the appropriate environmental constitution in order that makes a contribution to the whole society. • Government should maintain close ties with local communities and the public should make contributing to society through publicising the activities and assisting environmental conservation activities to raise awareness among the public of environmental protection and realise that ecological management. 我们保持着密切联系,当地社区和贡献社会宣传我们的活动,帮助环境保护活动。 宣传我们的活动,帮助环境保护活动