作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Dear Li Ming, I am writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my heartfelt congratulations to you on your success in passing the entrance examination.And I would like to make some suggestions on your forthcoming years when you will study in the university. To begin with,it is advisable for you to be equipped with the computer skills,considering that we are now in a high-tech age.Besides,I would recommend that you continue studying English in your spare time,which will lay a solid foundation for your future study abroad.Lastly,emphasis should be given to communication skills as well as academic achievements. I genuinely hope that you will take my advice into consideration.Wish you a splendid university life. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
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