2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

By environmental education, the public did their damnedest to creating awareness and comprehension of the environmental law in order that makes a contribution to the whole society. Government should maintain close ties with local communities and the public through publicising the activities and assisting environmental conservation activities to raise awareness among the public of environmental protection and realise that ecological management.