2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

能较准确地使用高级词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

By environmental education, the public did their damnedest to creating awareness and comprehension of the environmental laws in order that makes a contribution to the whole society. Government should maintain close ties with local communities and the public through publicising the activities and assisting environmental conservation activities to raise awareness among the public of environmental protection and realise that ecological management.