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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:2002
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

全文结构较为严谨;请作者增加词汇丰富度,加强拼写检查;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。

用户练习作文:

More and more pelope choose to travel in the past decade in the city. Why thrive this phenomenon ? The tendency result from many factors. On the one hand, the people's living standard has been improved with the rapid social development.They have capacity to travel when have enough money and free time. On the other hand, the organizers of scenic spot committed to construct good spots, and hold many preferential activities to attract tourists. Of course,the phenomenon is closely related with mentality change of people. As is known to all every coin hsa two sides, the results of this phenomenon is no exception. It can bring thrive of some city that deserve the place of tourism, and to promoto people's communication by face to face. At the same time, this could be good for people health. However, if have too many people travel at the same time, it could lead to spots or traffic accidents.

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