2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Environmental Policy demonstrates is liable for sustainable development with responsible environmental stewardship。 As well as offer a fair, stable and transparent atmosphere for both domestically and for foreign investors had sight and ambition. the agent should monitor and report improve their environmental performance of the business.also ,agent can offer all available means training and resources to policy more intact and unifying. Some environmental groups including environmental expense data to support provides essential evidence for the effective policies Encouraging several international environmental organizations  take advantage of scientific investigation method to meet social circumstances and developmental needs