2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者高级词汇使用比较准确，不过文中词汇表达贫乏；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Environmental Policy demonstrates is liable for sustainable development with responsible environmental stewardship。 Some environmental groups including environmental expense data to support provides essential evidence for the effective policies Encouraging several international environmental organizations  take advantage of scientific investigation method to meet social circumstances and developmental needs Encouraging several international environmental organizations  take advantage of scientific investigation method to meet social circumstances and developmental needs