单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter for the purpose of making a complaint about the flaws of your product-an electronic dictionary which I bought from your online store the other way. The problems I have found are as follows.To begin with,it often breaks down for no reason,which gives much inconvenience and trouble with my use.In addition,its screen is covered with a few scratches.Lastly,some of the keys on the keyboard fail to work well. Considering these factors,I strongly request that you should send me a new one or refund me the money.I would appreciate it a lot if you could take my complaint seriously and see to it promptly.I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Your sincerely, Zhang Wei