采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;有效的运用了一些复杂句。
Nowadays,people say"something we saw is right, something we heard is unreal."But what I would like to say is that evething is either right or wrong judging from seeing and hearing,and we can't conclude as soon as what we saw and heard as well. there are some reasons can prove it.Maybe something you saw or heard is a unimportant part of conversations against aim.
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