采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章在句法方面做的很棒,复杂句的比例可适当提高;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒。
Nowadays,people say"something we saw is right, something we heard is unreal."But what I would like to say is that everything is either right or wrong judging from seeing and hearing,and we can't conclude as soon as what we saw and heard as well. There are some reasons to show that. Maybe that something you saw or heard is an unimportant part of conversations not belong to aim.
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