采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用。
Nowadays,people say"something we saw is right, something we heard is unreal ". But what I would like to say is that everything is either right or wrong judging from seeing and hearing, and we can't conclude as soon as what we saw and heard as well. There are some reasons to show that. Maybe that something you saw or heard is an unimportant part of conversations not belong to aim.
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