2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing the letter for the purpose of making a complaint about the flaws of your product-an electronic dictionary which I bought from your online store the other way. The problems I have found are as follows.To begin with,it often breaks down for no reason,which gives much inconvenience and trouble with my use.In addition,its screen is covered with so many scratches that I cannot watch the pictures distinctly.Lastly,some of the keys on the keyboard fail to work well. Considering these factors,I strongly request that you should send me a new one or refund me the money.I would appreciate it a lot if you could take my complaint seriously and see to it promptly.I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Your sincerely, Zhang Wei