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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

I disagree with the statement, I will give three reasons to support my opinion first of all, everything has two sides, the advantages and disadvantages side. snap judgments are usually made in a short period of time, which does not allowed the observers have enogh time to cover the other side of the matter. sondly, people made judgment by their experience, yet somehow, everyone is unique in this world, different life make their different experience, in that case, the judgment could be very different. thirdly, the snap judgment are easily misleaded by the envrionment, without a comperhensive consideration and a process of logical analyses, observors may easily be distracting their attention, that will lead a wrong judgment.

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