2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is located in tongren guizhou province.If my foregin firend want to go to my hometown and the first, i will take him to the tongren and one of the most famous fanjing mountains to play.There are a lot of golden monkeys 、beautiful flowers and maitreya.In a word, in my heart fanjing mountains is pefect. The second,i will take him to my center city ,there are many food,for example, green bean powder、crispy rice powder、snowbailling usury、rice crust、roll powder、sticky rice、fried samples and so on.