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文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加复合句的使用,注意个别句子错误;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。
Being careful with money in daily life benefits a lot. Nowadays,there is a hot debeat on whether,including students,should be careful with money in daily life,the acts of being careful with money including collect all kinds of coupons,look for group-buy deals ,buy clothes in a sale .some people think that all this may not us a smart consumers. However,in my opinion, i argure that being careful with money benefits a lot . why do i think being careful with money benefits a lot . fristly.it is really a good habit for all of us.and it is a great virture .In the morden society ,money is become more and more difficult to earn,it needs hard working ,so save money will make you can just use the money in the poper time .and it can really cut down your buget. being careful with money ,in some aspects,is a another way to save money ,when you were in hump , the saved money can be really work and help you a lot . secondly , being careful with money can let us to build a good consepct of finacial management , nowadys , learning how to manage money it is really useful. and we can just start learning it from being careful with money , especially the students in schools. they get their money almostly form their parents supports. so it of great important to be careful with money .because parents earn it really hardly ,they should careful with it. At the end ,I think being careful with money has a lot benefits outweight the disadvangtages. we would better to learn how to being careful with money ,because it comes not so easy ,so it needs to be charish . just through some ways such as collect coupons ,group-by,and so on .....it can make us to build a good habit and it is helpful for us .