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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33581
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加复合句的使用,注意个别句子错误;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Being careful with money in daily life benefits a lot. Nowadays,there is a hot debeat on whether,including students,should be careful with money in daily life,the acts of being careful with money including collect all kinds of coupons,look for group-buy deals ,buy clothes in a sale .some people think that all this may not us a smart consumers. However,in my opinion, i argure that being careful with money benefits a lot . why do i think being careful with money benefits a lot . fristly.it is really a good habit for all of us.and it is a great virture .In the morden society ,money is become more and more difficult to earn,it needs hard working ,so save money will make you can just use the money in the poper time .and it can really cut down your buget. being careful with money ,in some aspects,is a another way to save money ,when you were in hump , the saved money can be really work and help you a lot . secondly , being careful with money can let us to build a good consepct of finacial management , nowadys , learning how to manage money it is really useful. and we can just start learning it from being careful with money , especially the students in schools. they get their money almostly form their parents supports. so it of great important to be careful with money .because parents earn it really hardly ,they should careful with it. At the end ,I think being careful with money has a lot benefits outweight the disadvangtages. we would better to learn how to being careful with money ,because it comes not so easy ,so it needs to be charish . just through some ways such as collect coupons ,group-by,and so on .....it can make us to build a good habit and it is helpful for us .

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