2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多。

Mobile Phone Can Not Contral People's Life In the picture above vivide descripe the people all roll in the deep of phone's world.When the techonogy grown,the phone are more and more humanly,But i think that is not a good phonomeno. fristly,people useing mobile phone every moment,the digial decive will destor men's body,particuliary is men's eye.And is alway can broken pregnant women's body serciously.Secondly,people rely on mobile phone very much,if one day they lost there phone they will go crazy.Last but not least,mobile phone dechline obtunity that people communicate with others. sum up on,we should useing mobie phone reasonable.