从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺。
My hometown used to have a lot of trees there.The river was filled with fish.The street was narrow and the houses were small.People lived a simple life and got a little money.I think my hometown changes a lot in the past twenty years.Now,there are many tall buildings on the street.People drive cars instead of ride bikes.