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Living in an age when the teenages are the precious of their parents, so we can never fail to figure out that they are the rare conscious of share and encouragement. However, encouragement is a kind of love and is of great matter among modern life, espacially among youngesters.The reasons why I insist on encouragement plays an important role mainly lie in the following aspects. To begain with, encouragement is love which can melt any embrass things. It is a power which push you go forward. To addition, It can help you fight the difficulties. Like the movie "Frozen" performanced that love saved Elas's life and melted the ice, what's the most important is love is a power making people together. To sum up, encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times．Only puting encouragement in our mind can we enjoy the pleasure of resistance difficultys.
