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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错。
Living in an age when the teenagers are the precious of their parents, so we can never fail to figure out that they are the rare conscious of share and encouragement. However, encouragement is a kind of love and is of great matter among modern life, especially among youngsters.The reasons why I insist on encouragement plays an important role mainly lies in the following aspects. To begin with, encouragement is love which can melt any embarrassing question. It is a power which pushes you to go forward. To addition, it can help you fight the difficulties. Like the movie "Frozen" performed that love saved Elas's life and melted the ice, what's the most important is love is a power making people together. To sum up, encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times．Only putting encouragement in our mind can we enjoy the pleasure of resistance difficulties.
