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One of the best parts of Shopping way is becoming more and more popular around the world. There are two different advantages between Online-Shopping and Traditional Shopping Store. As far as I am concerned, Online-shopping is not my select, since the effect is not I expect most. Apparently, science and technology convince us to choose Online-shopping, for it is much cheaper than Traditional Shopping store, and also for many people who lazy to go outside. Personally, Online-shopping is cheaper , but it is not worth to choose ,owing to the poor quality. It is difficult to ask for a reason for complaining once we are cheated. On the other hand, I comprehend we are lazy to go outside occasionally, but it such a wasting time for waiting to get what you want. In contrast, I prefer Traditional Shopping store supplementary, even it is not as cheap as Online-shopping, because the good quality always worthier. Thereafter, as soon as I choose what I want, I can just have it and I do not need to wait. Obviously, Traditional Shopping store is the way what I like. It is more convince me for saving time and getting good quality stuff. In addition, I would recommend to using Online-shopping if we do not have time to go outside.
