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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11298
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

The picture is showing to us that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. There's no doubt that cell phones have become an important part of our life. With the development of technology and the use of the mobile phone in people's life is increasing because cell phones become more and more intelligent, and make our life more convenient. For example, you can order the ticket online by using cell phones and the software in cell phones can lead you to where you want to go. Certainly, cell phones can bring much convenience to us, in the meantime, they will bring something bad if we overusing.First of all, your score of subjects will decline and your dream will fail. What's more, your eyes will sustain an injury. Last but not lease, overusing cell phones may produce radiation and disease will appear from your body such as headache. As far as I'm concerned, we should use cell phones properly. Only in this way can cell phones help us in more fields.

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