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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中用词稍显贫乏；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。
I understand a new product with 5760 from your company during the exhibition in Shanghai on December 15. Because of your new product made a deep impression on me, so I hope you can give one price list and intruction to me and l will understand more about your product. Thank's for your cooperation, hope we can establish business relationship.
