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为了增强师生们的身体素质,你们学校每周坚持开展体育活动,取得了一定的效果。为此,区教委领导领着一个美国中学访问团到你校参观。你作为学生代表要向外国友人和领导表示欢迎,并要起草一份发言稿,内容包括:
1. When do the students take part in the sports?
2. What sports do the students / teachers have every day?
演讲稿开头已给出。
Dear foreign friends and leaders,简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Dear foreign friends and leaders, Welcome to our school.Doing sports are very important in our school,because the doing sports are more and more populaely.Students health are very important,so many students take part in the sports.our shcool has many sports.For example,play football,soccer and ping-pong.Many teachers and students do sports lots of.Doing lots of sports can make people healthier,so sports are one of the most important in our school.
