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为了增强师生们的身体素质,你们学校每周坚持开展体育活动,取得了一定的效果。为此,区教委领导领着一个美国中学访问团到你校参观。你作为学生代表要向外国友人和领导表示欢迎,并要起草一份发言稿,内容包括:
1. When do the students take part in the sports?
2. What sports do the students / teachers have every day?
演讲稿开头已给出。
Dear foreign friends and leaders,正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Dear foreign friends and leaders， Welcome to our school. Now doing sports is very popular in our school. Every term we hold a sports meeting on the playground. And every day teachers and we have different kinds of sports, such as ball games, running, skipping and jumping. We like to play games in the morning and have matches between classes in the afternoon. We become healthier and healthier. Sports are very important to our health and study. I hope everyone can take an active part in the sports. Why not join us?
