2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Recently,there is a survey about the happiness index living in the big cities. Immediately, it triggers a widespread debate on this survey.Some people claim that the quality of life in the large cities is decreasing .Therefore ,some people face the dilemma situations whether stay in the large cities or go back to their home town,small city, in the pursuit of high quality life. The topic of the decreasing quality living in the large cities is not fresh one.It is relative to billions of people's lives.Why do they complain the quality of life in big cities is decreasing,which is deep society problems.Firstly , it is the common phenomenon that people are much more than the community sources,such as educational sources、medical sources 、caretakers for senior citizens .Consequently ,people have to face the high pressures coming from children's enrollment、 high quality medical care and enjoyment retired life .Secondly ,traffic jam is always an annoying problem for the big city .Due to the situation ,people have to spend more time and energy on the daily commuting ,which decrease the feeling of happiness .Thirdly,we have to discuss the higher and higher price of the real estate in the big city .The growth of the price of the real estate upgrades dynamically beyond the ordinary people can afford economic burden .Most of people leaving the big cities are scared of high price of real estate .They can't even buy a little house .Meanwhile ,the price of the rent is higher and higher .It is the huge financial burden for people who have dream of striving the brilliant futures in the big cities . They have to face the reality ,and count the cost of living . Although ,so many problem still exist in the big cities .Some questions can avoid or get better through the new policies of the government .Take the traffic in Shanghai which is the biggest financial city in China as an example , the state of Shanghai is striving for increasing and building the new lines of subways in order to tackle the traffic congestion and offer more convenience for the citizens .As for the crowded living condition and high price of real estate ,the government recently announced a serial of new policy aiming at controlling the unreasonable price.In my opinion ,the disadvantage of the big cities overweighs their shortcoming .