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Dear Mr Johnson: we have received the 3000 pc part at your send by 22 Dec. according to our signing of the no 35 order , the proudct quantity should are 3500 pcs and until now we haven't got other 500 parts. please check your product list and looking forward to your early reply. Thank you.