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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
文中词汇使用较丰富，但学术词汇使用太少；全文结构较为严谨；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。
As we can see from the cartoon that, a bottle lay on the ground with its milk spoilted out ,and one person who saw that seemed to be upset with words"oh!all over",but another looked not bad and said"there is still some milk in the bottle,how lucky I was".The above picture gives us a good lesson. In ones lives, something bad cannot be avoided.Different people take different attitude when facing bad things.Possitive people always be able to see the sunlight even though it hide behind some clouds, while the pessitive often complaint about their lost things.Above all,it is ones attitude that depends his success or failure. For my part,I think we should learn from the possitive.On matter how difficulties we will meet in our lives,all of us should take possitive attitude towards them.Only in this way,can we make a success.
