小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆。

Mary is my best friend, she is a very lovely girl. She has golden long hair and blue eyes. After lesson we always do our homework together and check it for each other, then we play our favorite games. People say we are good sisters. but I don't think so, because we have different hobby. For example, Mary like purple, but I like pink, and Mary is good at singing, but I don't. So some times Mary is a good teacher for me.