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I have a good friend from USA ,his name is danis ,I told him my hometown is a middle city in our country .perhaps a smalll city in other memery ,but when and whatever I going to anywhere,I will told them my favorate and pride of my love city is Jilin City Jilin City is only the same name with province ,there is a beauty river named Songhua river .In winter we will see the WUSONG seems tree has growning the snow flawer . My home town has river and montain ,people said ,sea mountains will armbition and clever.Of course I'm a smart girl^^ My hometown has many kreaon ,Man zu , many of folk food is very intersting and dilicious.
