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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6320
要求:
题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival, or the Duanwu Festival is one of the important festivals in China on the 5th day of the 5th moon of the lunar calendar. Nowadays ,The Dragon boat Festival is in memory of a poet named Qu Yuan who was in Chu Dynasty. And on this days ,there are many customs among Chinese peoples. To speak of QU Yuan ,that is no one who doesn’t know him in china. He is a outstanding poet who had written a lot of famous poems. And he is also famous as loving his dynasty .In his time ,it is Chu Dynasty .He is the first patriotic poet in our history. Finally he ended his life by jumping over the river. . because he is so grieved of his country is conquered . In the later , The Dragon boat Festival is in memory of him. Nowadays, there is the customs of eating rice dumplings and racing dragon-boat , putting Astemisia argyi on home ,and wearing a sachet. Naturally , rice dumplings is the most widely circulated customs. On this day , people will prepare sticky rice and bamboo leaves to make rice dumplings ,and also has some mixed ingredients such as beans, meat, red dates.....the rice dumplings taste is different in different regions . Northern people like the sweet rice dumplings , southern people like the salty dumplings . All of people will eat the rice dumplings on that day . And in the most southern regions , people also racing the dragon-boat . In the total, The customs is for celebrate the festival and to memory the great patriotic poet Qu Yuan. And I think it is also a day can gather family members together , and do some family activities together . so it is a day to have a reunion and memory of the great poet and to remember the history.

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