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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1788
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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while studying some people like study alone some like study in a group. In my opinion i prefer study alone. While study alone i feel mor efficiency than study in a group.Why study alone more efficiency?Here is my experience. First study alone is good for concentration.When study alone you can focus your mind fully on the subject you are learning. that may help your apprehend the article easily.solve the problem quickly.While learn in group you will irevently distract by someone's talk or movement with my clasmates.My mind always been disrupt by someone.I can't focus on the proble.I can't solve the problem.After school i study alone on that proble.I quickly solve that answer. Second study alone means you can have more time spend on your subject not other not important things.last summer i and other friends decide to do homework together.When we meet first we talk seperately to each other about their weekend plan,favorite food and favorite music etc.It takes about half an hour before we really start our sturding. the most important thing is study alone can cultivate your ability of interdependent.Study alone all you have is yourself.You can't count on anybody.That make you to develop your ability to solve proble independent.Forexample when you study in a group when you encount an problem you can't solve.Then one of your group solve the problem.You may quit easily and ask help from that people.By doing so you lose the oppertunity to grow up.May be it's convenient now but it harm in long time. All in all studying alone good for your concentration,save your time and cultivate your ability to do things independent.I like study alone.

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