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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1787
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

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用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Some person like study alone but some like study in a group. In my opinion i prefer study alone. I feel more efficiency study alone than study in a group.Why study alone more efficiency?Here is my experience. First of all study alone is good to concentration.When study alone you can focus your mind fully on the subject which you are learning. That may help you apprehend the article easily and solve the problem quickly.While learn in group i will inevitably distract by someone's talk or movement with my classmates.My mind always disrupted by someone.I can't focus on the problem so I can't solve the problem.After school i study alone on that problem alone.I quickly get the answer. Second study alone means you can have more time spend on your subject ignore insignificant things.last summer i and other friends decide to do homework together.When we meet first we talk to each other about our weekend plan,favorite food and favorite music etc.It takes about half an hour before we really start our studying. The most important thing study alone is that it can cultivate your ability of independent.Study alone all you depend is yourself.You can't count on anybody.That force you to develop your ability to solve problem independent.For example when you study in a group once you encounter an problem you can't solve.If one of your group solve the problem.You may quit easily and ask help from that person.By doing so you lose the opportunity to grow up.May be it's convenient now but it will harm your learn ability in long time. All in all studying alone is good for your concentration,save your time and cultivate your ability to do things independent.I like study alone.

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