作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;简单句偏多了;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
mar. 25th, 2008 sunday fine I got up very early this morning. after breakfast, i helped mom with housework. Afterwards, i started to do homework. Homework was very interesting, so i did it well. I played table tennis with my friend lingling in the afternoon. we enjoyed ourselves very much. In the evening, i watched the TV with my parents, and prepared for the next day's lesson on my own. What a busy day today!