小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章衔接手法恰当；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，不过单词拼写做的很棒。

There is an old picture on my desk. It is a picture of Jim's family. The man who stood in front of a tree is Jim's father. The woman who sat nearby Jim's father, is Jim's mother. Both of them are English teachers in a primary shcool. The girl who was eating a ice cream near their car is Jim's sister, her name is Kate. Jim as well as his sister was in the same school. Both of them love learning English.