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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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衔接成分偏少;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

It is unwise to judge a person by their apperance simply,because nobel qualities are usually hidden beneath the surface. As the old saying said "Do not judge a book by its cover ", we should calm down to estimate somebody. It is worth to be mentioned Zhuo Geliang who is a famous person in Chinese ancient years. He had a wife .someone said she was very ugly.He did not care his wife' apperance.what appeals of him most is his wife's smart and kind. She helped him solve many problems.Someone who have real intelligence never judge a person only by thier appearance,they will pay attention to the nobel quality. In a word, we can't be disguided by appearance at the first eyes.we should have calm down and have a deep thought.

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