小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；简单句偏多了；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has a long and black hairs, two big and black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like she very much.