2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

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Having a healthy body is a importance thing in our life. if we don't have a healthy body, we can't do many things. For example, we don't have a happy life when we got the sevious sick like cancer. We have to stay the hospital all the day, all the month, even all the year. Therefore, we will lose many happiness in our life. Father and mother always tell me that I should notice myself body. In the winter, I should notice to add clothes. In the meat, i should notice myself diet, and i shouldn't eat too much or less. You always take care of my life if I am too tired or if I have enoung time to sieep. However, you are always notice me, and you ignore youselvious. you always ignore your health. You always forget to add ciothes, notice diet,and even ignore your tired body. Those make me worry. I hope to you could have healthy habits. Having healthy body make me happy.