单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;文章组织结构良好;作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度,部分句子有错误。
I have a good friend,she is a beautiful girl,her hair is very long and black , the eyes is big and black , and with a red mouth. her voice is very nice ,so she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like she very much.