简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;文章组织结构良好。
I have a good friend,she is a beautiful girl,her hair is very long and black , the eyes is big and black, and with a red mouth. Her voice is very nice,so she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books,playing computer games and chess. She is also nice. She often helps us.Our classmates like she very much.