2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer was invented by human which reveals the wisdom of human .With the development of computer,people realized that brought something good or bad out of control in our life .On the one hand.The advantage is broden our eyesights,saving our time and giving our the convenition.Apart from that,it also make a distance among people owing to everyone fixing on their mobilephone .Everyone can not let their phone alone but scaning information with their fingers.