2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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China faces a deep and enduring environmental crisis. Less than 1 percent of the country’s 500 largest cities meet World Health Organization clean-air criteria. More than one-quarter of China’s land is either desert or facing desertification. At least ten provinces are below the World Bank’s water poverty level, and up to 40 percent of China’s rivers are reported to be seriously polluted (20 percent are so polluted that the water is too toxic for human contact). In conjunction with ongoing crises—Beijing being enveloped in smog; more than 16,000 dead, diseased pigs floating down Shanghai’s Huangpu River; reports of toxic cadmium-laced rice being sold in Guangdong Province—it’s no wonder there are serious questions about the effectiveness of the Chinese government’s efforts to balance economic growth and environmental protection. 中国面临深刻和持久的环境危机。不到1%的国家的500个最大城市符合世界卫生组织的清洁能源标准。超过四分之一的中国土地是沙漠或面临沙漠化。至少十省贫困水平低于世界银行的水,,据报道,中国40%的河流被严重污染(20%污染,水太毒性对人类接触)。结合正在进行的crises-Beijing被笼罩在烟雾之中,超过16000人死亡,患病的猪浮上海黄浦江的;报告拖走大部分带镉的有毒大米销售广东省内难怪有严重的问题,中国政府的有效性的努力平衡经济增长和环境保护