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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句采用很棒;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

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Accroding to the survey we could know it was made on 2011 and about the relation of between Unemployment rate and Median weekly earnings andEducation Pays. And the conclusion indicate that most people‘s Unemployment rate and Median weekly earnings was increasing and decreasing gradualing when Education Pays was improving.However,there existed an exception that Doctoral degree and Profession degree .They had an objective phenomenon. The survey proved a thing that Education Pays was likely to decided your life quality and your happiness,but it was not absolute .In my opnions, if you have a not good Education Pays but have a real ability to do something,you could creat your own life and

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