2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；文中衔接词丰富。

Facing serious environment problems because attrition,pollution, and stock depletion seriously hamper economic and social development. Exhaustion of resources and the worsening ecological environment has become a possible bottleneck and grave impediment to the nation’s economic and social development. Although the central have already issues environmental policy, a majority of the releate criterions were unsuccessful. Namely,China has not been able to reach in the 12th five—year plan on environment .That fall short of the targets has burning of fossil fuels releases sulfur dioxide，dust, smoke,and other harmful gases in the air，Wastewater treatment handled properly