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Currently,a plurality of cities give citizens free admissions to visit museums.In this way,citizens not only can deeperly learn about the culture of the city,but also can acquire more knowledge.It is liable to attract many people who are interested in museums to visit for making the city more famous and displaying itself. Nevertheless,some people have no sense to protect the exihibitions actively.Instead,sometimes they would damage it.Therefore,there is an additional expense used to repair the damaged ones.And it may lead to a financial deficit.Increasing numbers of cleaners are ordered to work overtime as the indoor openned to visitors are untidy and not decent. So,from my perspective,the measure that giving citizens free admission to museums is necessary and intelligent,but related sectors should seriously publish those people damaging exihibitions intendedly.In the meantime,with the exihibitions in protection,the museums should limit the open-time and grip on the flow of people for lowing the damage of exihibitions.
